I hope you all can give me your opinion on my early work?

Heal me hands of angels,
And search out all my pain,
Restore my hope, remove my fear,
And bring me peace again,

Cleanse me, loving farther,
Take bitterness away,
Let me forgive as one forgiven,
And bring me peace today,

Help me, guardian angels,
And show me all Thy hate,
Dispel the memories of guilt,
And bring me peace within,

Help me guiding spirit,
To give peace of mind,
And heavens spirit helpers,
Bring a peace to all mankind.